Yeah this is gonna be a long stoory but if youve got the time please read it to understand. if you dont just go to the last paragraph! ok here it goes:
Right now i am in 6th grade. (dont talk about how i shouldnt care i mean seriously thats just stupid.) i dont really care right now about it. in 3rd grade, onr of the most popular guys in scool and me were kinda friends. one stupid day, stupid me being stupid stupidly did a really stupid thing. then scince he was so popular, the whole world knew because he told everyone. that didnt do much. then in 4th grade we had a social studies test and i got an F. (yeah i was very careless and dumb.) so theres my smart reputation, even thought now im straight a's and b's.
i have really curly hair. in those young grades, i let it flop out and i didnt even brush it. it looked horrible. i also let my mom pick out my glasses which of course were harry potter glasses. so i looked pretty weird. i have a really big nose too. people would always call me ugly. (lol my aunt told me to smack them) i started to straighten my hair and get better taste in clothes and glasses in the middle of 5th grade to now.
personality-yeah i told reeeeeeeeeeeeeeally dumb jokes...i was really weird, and my parents thought it was cute so id say them at school. people still think im like that.
so im pretty much like a dork. not a geeky nerd thing, and not a fru-fru princess girl, not a jock, not anything. just a normal kid that everyone gossips about and doesnt like even before they met me.
i do have lots of friends. they all have to be girls though because all of the guys seriously have something against me. just because that popular kid back then is the top of the school now, and if your seen with me, you cant be cool.
its not the guys that are afraid of girls, i have a lot of friends and all the guys flirt with them....right in front of my face. not like im expecting anything but hello IM as in ME the stupid kid is hanging out with your little crush here, and if you do date her, youll have to be at all these parties and stuff, with ME. and most guys think that. a lot of them would just ask me where one of my friends were or something..........im not gonna be all jealous of my friends i feel good for them that people like them. im not trying to be selfish, but i dont wanna grow up being that girl with nobody. its not the only thing on my mind, but, im looking at the future.
OK HERES THE LAST PARAGRAPH BUT PLEASE READ THE OTHER STUFF IF YOU CAN ITS INTERESTING........lol %26gt;%26gt;%26gt;%26gt;%26gt;%26gt;%26gt;%26gt;%26gt;%26gt;%26gt;%26gt;is there someway i can turn peoples minds around to get them to like me? is there a way to get me to be someone everyone wants to sit with at lunch? all that? i am good at cheerleading....but that doesnt feel right using cheerleading as a popularity boost. next year is middle school, we got our first dance, and ill be the only one with nobody.
****READ READ READ READ:DO NOT write i need to stop thinking about being popular and cool and a little girl that wants a boyfirend. i need a head start on high school. i need to no how to do it, not to stop dreaming. i believe i can do it, so dont say i cant.
thx!!!Do your %26quot;reputations%26quot; and %26quot;clixes%26quot; change when you go to middle school and high school?People don't tell you to stop dreaming because they think you can't do it, they say it because, in your case, those things shouldn't matter to you.
Read these links and you should have some information:
http://www.wikihow.com/Be-Popular-in-Hig鈥?/a>
http://www.wikihow.com/Be-a-Better-Perso鈥?/a>
http://www.wikihow.com/Find-Yourself
http://www.wikihow.com/Elevate-Your-Self鈥?/a>
http://www.wikihow.com/Feel-Pretty
http://www.wikihow.com/Seem-Cool-(Even-i鈥?/a>Do your %26quot;reputations%26quot; and %26quot;clixes%26quot; change when you go to middle school and high school?Yes, high school will be different.Do your %26quot;reputations%26quot; and %26quot;clixes%26quot; change when you go to middle school and high school?The truth is harsh....guys have it worse in school than gals. No, you can't make them like you. Sit with your freinds at lunch, even if they are chicks and will never date you in school. There probably are girls that like you (too date) but chances are your standards are too high (which goes for the entire human race) DO NOT join cheerleading you will get beaten up (sorry, kid, but thats the world). As for the dance next year, tell them dancing is for girls. (But since you like to watch girls dancing, you might go, haha). Also, if your old enough, comedy is an artform. Check out Eddie Murphy, Chris Rock, and Dave Chappelle to name a few (censored on Youtube - don't get me in trouble! And pick up an electric guitar, young man! Every one loves dudes in a band (especially punk)
Good luck kiddo!Many of your friends will change because of drugs and alcohol. The most behaved girl in your class might turn into a druggie in high school. So be careful in choosing your friends.I'm finally in high school now, and all I can think about is that I wish I could have redone my middle school years. No regrets, just improvements Now that I am in hhigh school I'm just trying to be cool with myself before I start trying to make everyone want to be my friend. Plus, when people see that you aren't sunselfconsciousor always freaking out about how you look, your friends, popularity,etc. they'll think that you are comfortable with yourself and people like to be friends with others who are confident, not that worrying about looks and stuff ever hurt anyone. And about the dance, don't feel that you are going to be the only one without anyone, because no one is ever alone. If you're feeling left out, you have three options: dance alone, leave, find someone else who's alone(don't let their reputation or status EVER stop you). About the boys thing, you just entered middle school? Then don't rush anything. Cliche, I know. But maybe you want your first kiss or your first whatever to be with someone special. I did, and I found that person- in HIGH SCHOOL. I'm not a guy or anything, but when a guy sees you and you aren't fussing over anything and everything, they'll feel it's easier to talk to you.
So just inhale, exhale, and live your live. Have fun, no regrets!
Saturday, September 24, 2011
Which is more important for a class in your opinion attendance or test grades?
Some of my classmates were complaining that a kid who has missed like 10 days of class received a higher grade than they did overall for the course. He got great grades on all his tests even higher than the students who have never missed any class and now the teacher is contemplating changing his grade because of all the complaining which I think is bull. He studied hard just like everyone else. Just because he missed a few classes doesn't mean he should get less of a grade. By less of a grade I mean she was talking about taking it down about one or two. Meaning if he would get a high B it would go down to like a C or high D. How unfair!!! Or at least to me it is.Which is more important for a class in your opinion attendance or test grades?This depends on the nature of the class. If it was strictly lecture then I think the grade should stand. But if the class involves participation such as a lab, then attendance is important.server fingernails on a blackboard
Which is more important for a class in your opinion attendance or test grades?
Some of my classmates were complaining that a kid who has missed like 10 days of class received a higher grade than they did overall for the course. He got great grades on all his tests even higher than the students who have never missed any class and now the teacher is contemplating changing his grade because of all the complaining which I think is bull. He studied hard just like everyone else. Just because he missed a few classes doesn't mean he should get less of a grade. By less of a grade I mean she was talking about taking it down about one or two. Meaning if he would get a high B it would go down to like a C or high D. How unfair!!! Or at least to me it is.Which is more important for a class in your opinion attendance or test grades?For me attending classes leads to better grades because it helps me focus more on what should or should not study in huge massive books!!Which is more important for a class in your opinion attendance or test grades?the kid should get what he earned, not what the class thinks he should get. so what if he missed class and was still able to get a good grade? if attendance was not outlined in a syllabus as being something that contributed to his grade, then the teacher should not be able to change his grade.Which is more important for a class in your opinion attendance or test grades?in my opinion attendance isn't important. as long as you learn what is being thought, thats fine. it's even better than being present in class but hasn't learned at all.
How would you punish your sophomore daughter who you caught changing her report card grades?
so so umm, lets say ur 15 year old daughter, a sophomore in highschool has been telling you how well shed been doing at school and you trusted her. now comes the time when the report cards are supposed to be mailed home, and she gives you this piece of paper, and on it are 3 bs and 3 as. these grades are the same as the grades she got her freshman year, but your wondering why is the paper just like this? you go on the computer and u see a file named DELETE and so you open it and on it you see your childs real report card, an F in math, 2 ds, 1 c and 2 bs. now how would you punish your daughter whom youve given pretty much everything. oh and i forgot to say your daughters excuse was, %26quot;i didnt want to disappoint you, and i know i can fix this%26quot; blah blah blah.
ps. is it fair that a mother would take away her daughters skin care(proactiv) as part of punishment??? so now her daughters face is swelling and breaking out llike no other????How would you punish your sophomore daughter who you caught changing her report card grades?Um, no, it's not right to take away medication. Messing with a child's face is never okay. Messing with a teenager's self-esteem is never okay. Besides that, a punishment should be related to the actual crime committed.
If it were my daughter, she would be grounded until at least midterms when we would review the grade situation. I would also make contact with her school and let them know the situation and work out a method to check her school progress. I would also ask the school to punish her because she broke a school rule on top of a rule at home.
Needless to say, she would be %26quot;on probation%26quot; for quite some time and wouldn't be getting any extras until she'd proven a repentant spirit and had %26quot;done her time.%26quot;
Teenagers make stupid mistakes. That's why they still live at home with their parents and aren't out on their own yet. As parents, it's our job to guide them through these mistakes and help them to see the error of their ways. It is not our job to make them feel like their physical maintenance or sense of self-worth can be cast aside when they've messed up and done something they shouldn't.How would you punish your sophomore daughter who you caught changing her report card grades?Woah, that's a harsh punishment. I think that your daughter needs to know that you are disappointed in her grades, but even MORE disappointed in her lying and changing her grades. Her punishment should be %26quot;normal%26quot; not taking away treatments that make her skin healthy. Make sure she understands that just because you get disappointed your love for her doesn't lessen. She doesn't need to lie to you. She needs to work harder and look for help to fix her grades early on, but your love stays the same.How would you punish your sophomore daughter who you caught changing her report card grades?Taking away the skin care product is out of bounds.
Grounding the girl in question, to ONLY be at home or at school, with no other activities, until she can raise her grades is well within practical guidelines. As also would be limiting her social activities and internet usage.
The attempt at forgery is grounds for further disciplinary action... my parents would have spanked me red %26amp; blue for that.The daughter should understand that academic honesty is important and that lying is not an amiable quality. A meeting should be set up with the teachers of the classes she is failing. She should also be enrolled into summer school, that is punishment in itself. As for the punishment that is distributed to her, taking away skin care products is a little petty. One should make her sign an academic acheivement policy and agree to keep up grades, and if the promise is not kept, her worldy possesions will be systematically taken away,( cell phone, camera, computer, t.v., car, time with friends).
ps. is it fair that a mother would take away her daughters skin care(proactiv) as part of punishment??? so now her daughters face is swelling and breaking out llike no other????How would you punish your sophomore daughter who you caught changing her report card grades?Um, no, it's not right to take away medication. Messing with a child's face is never okay. Messing with a teenager's self-esteem is never okay. Besides that, a punishment should be related to the actual crime committed.
If it were my daughter, she would be grounded until at least midterms when we would review the grade situation. I would also make contact with her school and let them know the situation and work out a method to check her school progress. I would also ask the school to punish her because she broke a school rule on top of a rule at home.
Needless to say, she would be %26quot;on probation%26quot; for quite some time and wouldn't be getting any extras until she'd proven a repentant spirit and had %26quot;done her time.%26quot;
Teenagers make stupid mistakes. That's why they still live at home with their parents and aren't out on their own yet. As parents, it's our job to guide them through these mistakes and help them to see the error of their ways. It is not our job to make them feel like their physical maintenance or sense of self-worth can be cast aside when they've messed up and done something they shouldn't.How would you punish your sophomore daughter who you caught changing her report card grades?Woah, that's a harsh punishment. I think that your daughter needs to know that you are disappointed in her grades, but even MORE disappointed in her lying and changing her grades. Her punishment should be %26quot;normal%26quot; not taking away treatments that make her skin healthy. Make sure she understands that just because you get disappointed your love for her doesn't lessen. She doesn't need to lie to you. She needs to work harder and look for help to fix her grades early on, but your love stays the same.How would you punish your sophomore daughter who you caught changing her report card grades?Taking away the skin care product is out of bounds.
Grounding the girl in question, to ONLY be at home or at school, with no other activities, until she can raise her grades is well within practical guidelines. As also would be limiting her social activities and internet usage.
The attempt at forgery is grounds for further disciplinary action... my parents would have spanked me red %26amp; blue for that.The daughter should understand that academic honesty is important and that lying is not an amiable quality. A meeting should be set up with the teachers of the classes she is failing. She should also be enrolled into summer school, that is punishment in itself. As for the punishment that is distributed to her, taking away skin care products is a little petty. One should make her sign an academic acheivement policy and agree to keep up grades, and if the promise is not kept, her worldy possesions will be systematically taken away,( cell phone, camera, computer, t.v., car, time with friends).
How do you deal when everyone in the seventh grade at your school hates you?
ppl at my school hates me it sucks they make fun of me and everything my school only goes to 7th grade so yeah i cant change schools either my mom know she tried her hardness but it don't work and this is a choice school tooooHow do you deal when everyone in the seventh grade at your school hates you?I promise it's only 7th grade. I'm a freshman in college and I definatly remember the junior high days when it seemed like the world was going to end. You feel like you're forced to hang with what's called the %26quot;unpopular%26quot;, you sometimes eat, walk, and sit alone. Everyone makes fun of you. Trust me, i remember the days. But it's only junior high school. When you go to high school, depending on how big your town is, half the people you attend school with now will switch schools and many other people will move to your town. You'll meet new people and make new friends as time goes by. In 10 years and even 5 years it wont matter who liked who and who sat alone because i guarantee you you'll probably never see those people again. If all they have to do in there lives is pick on other people then how good of a person does that make them? From personal experience i know that everything gets easier when you just care about what other people think. They don't matter. I promise it gets easier. If it doesnt then you can find me personally and slap me. =) but it will. know it's hard now, but like i said, it's only 7th grade. and if your school only goes to 7th grade shouldn't you be in summer break soon and then 8th grade in a new school? good luck.How do you deal when everyone in the seventh grade at your school hates you?forget them.
those who mind dont matter, and those who matter dont mindHow do you deal when everyone in the seventh grade at your school hates you?who cares if they don't like you! you shouldnt care what people think. and youre only in 7th grade.... really youre going to grow up and be more successful than those losers and laugh at them.you will find that when you get older, %26quot; i'm 70 %26quot;, that where ever you go someone usually hate you for no reason and there is nothing you can do to make them like you. so that's your hate person. you're alright but they are not. go on with your life and stop letting it bother you.just be a bad ***...when ppl start laughin at you just point and laugh at them, you got to let them know you dont give a ****...if u walk around with your head down and upset they are gonna attack you more...and for whatever reason they are pickin on you...keep doin itso.. you got a lot of little miss trolls and they have you down for being the victim. everyone is gaining up on you? make some new friends or join a church organization. talk to your counselor..if u have one.i know its hard to ignore them...boy..little middle schools kids are ***..holes! just try to maintain confidence...look as good as u can...maybe a new hair..doo..that makes you look ..so cool. cheer up! you wont have to deal with these little trolls in high-school if you dont want to. and maybe they will grow-up by then.hang in there..these little miss trolls will get tired of what there doing.They are probably jealous of you and that's why they want to bring you down, they think if they can hurt your feelings then they will be better then you. But seriously ignore them, focus on your studies and try hard not to let them get you down. I bet you are an amazing girl with a lot of potential and that is why they make fun of you because they know that you are great and they only wish they could be as great as you! Its hard now and I wish kids would not bully and pick on other kids because it can be so hurtful but just remember to keep your chin up and smile often and know that you are a wonderful,unique individual with so much to offer. best of luck!**** em
those who mind dont matter, and those who matter dont mindHow do you deal when everyone in the seventh grade at your school hates you?who cares if they don't like you! you shouldnt care what people think. and youre only in 7th grade.... really youre going to grow up and be more successful than those losers and laugh at them.you will find that when you get older, %26quot; i'm 70 %26quot;, that where ever you go someone usually hate you for no reason and there is nothing you can do to make them like you. so that's your hate person. you're alright but they are not. go on with your life and stop letting it bother you.just be a bad ***...when ppl start laughin at you just point and laugh at them, you got to let them know you dont give a ****...if u walk around with your head down and upset they are gonna attack you more...and for whatever reason they are pickin on you...keep doin itso.. you got a lot of little miss trolls and they have you down for being the victim. everyone is gaining up on you? make some new friends or join a church organization. talk to your counselor..if u have one.i know its hard to ignore them...boy..little middle schools kids are ***..holes! just try to maintain confidence...look as good as u can...maybe a new hair..doo..that makes you look ..so cool. cheer up! you wont have to deal with these little trolls in high-school if you dont want to. and maybe they will grow-up by then.hang in there..these little miss trolls will get tired of what there doing.They are probably jealous of you and that's why they want to bring you down, they think if they can hurt your feelings then they will be better then you. But seriously ignore them, focus on your studies and try hard not to let them get you down. I bet you are an amazing girl with a lot of potential and that is why they make fun of you because they know that you are great and they only wish they could be as great as you! Its hard now and I wish kids would not bully and pick on other kids because it can be so hurtful but just remember to keep your chin up and smile often and know that you are a wonderful,unique individual with so much to offer. best of luck!**** em
Mp3 ringtones for the htc Tilt 2?
I'm trying to set one of the songs in my music library as a ringtone on my new Tilt 2 and I can't seem to get anything right. I've searched the internet and found these directions:
1.Temporarily change your import settings to a mid-grade MP3, like 96kbps
2.Pick any song in your library
3.Use the start and end time options in the song info dialog to pick your beginning and end points
4.Right click the song in the library and make MP3 version and BAM, instant ringtone
but how do you actually temporarily change your import settings to a mid-grade Mp3? If any of you have a better method please notify me.
I'm really confused so anyone's help would be greatly appreciated.Mp3 ringtones for the htc Tilt 2?use www.ventones.com the best site without a doubt.
you can make your own custom ringtone.
totally free
1.Temporarily change your import settings to a mid-grade MP3, like 96kbps
2.Pick any song in your library
3.Use the start and end time options in the song info dialog to pick your beginning and end points
4.Right click the song in the library and make MP3 version and BAM, instant ringtone
but how do you actually temporarily change your import settings to a mid-grade Mp3? If any of you have a better method please notify me.
I'm really confused so anyone's help would be greatly appreciated.Mp3 ringtones for the htc Tilt 2?use www.ventones.com the best site without a doubt.
you can make your own custom ringtone.
totally free
Is this a good 6th grade essay on baseball vs. softball?
You hit the ball and run the bases, everyone thinks that’s it to baseball and softball…but there is more. Though you may only see the hitting of the ball or the running of the bases, it’s also the love of the game, the cheers of the crowd, the hard rules that you have to follow, and much more! It’s true; baseball and softball are almost the same sports except for a few major differences. I think that what you are about to hear will change your heart and spirit about baseball and softball, seeing how they are similar or different and all.
Baseball and softball settings are kind of like the game Mirror Magic. You see the same thing, but if you look more closely there are some things that are different. Many lucky ones know the feeling of anxiety building as you walk done the darkened hallway, the smell of the fresh cut grass growing stronger and stronger, then finally the light opens up in front of you presenting the stadium ahead. This is the setting for American loving sports, baseball and softball. That’s right they may be different sports but they have the same setting. The tan line of the diamond on the grassy field is where they play. Though the game being performed may stink, and though it’s not your favorite team playing, no real American would turn down tickets to a game of either baseball or softball. That is why I say that the stadium shall always be full as long as the games of baseball and softball don’t die as passes by time. Both baseball and softball may be played on a diamond but they both don’t play the same game of food! Though there may be no insane man throwing peanuts yelling “Heads up!” like there usually would be at a baseball game, there is a snack bar to fill the hungry needs of fans at a softball game. So you may be walking into the same picture when visiting either a baseball or a softball game, but we all know they are different in their own way!
Each game needs rules and though baseball and softball are quite similar in many ways, they are also different. Football, dodge ball, soccer…these are all sports with the most similar rules? Well they are baseball and softball. Imagine how boring a sport would be without players! Luckily baseball and softball both have 9-10 players. However, all the 9-10 players on each team can’t stay in one spot! That is why both baseball and softball have infielders and outfielders. Don’t hate the game cause they ‘aint the same! The differences are why we love ‘em! For those who don’t innings are when both teams of each game get to play, and while baseball has 9 innings softball has 7 innings. Overhand throws and underhand throws are two completely different things. One is more powerful, while the other one…not so much. So if you are wondering which has the more powerful throw, its baseball which uses the overhand throw, while softball uses the underhand throw? Though some may not like the rules and others think it’s unfair we still follow them with the kindness of our hearts.
With no equipment and no players there would be nothing left but a dusty, empty field with crickets chirping in the background. However, I thank god every day that mankind solved that problem by creating equipment and having players! Bats and balls aren’t the only thing similar in the topic of baseball vs. softball. Sliding is a useful trick in both baseball and softball, but to do this safely, no matter what sport you need knee pads for the least; and both baseball and softball use them! Weather some people consider it “manly” or not, both sports have their difference. Baseball is considered to be a “manly sport” by many people. However, softball takes the lead as a “womanly sport”. I guess that’s why most boys join baseball while girls join softball. Due to the “manliness” of baseball the ball is a hard white ball with red-stitched like lines on either side, yet softball has a softer yellow ball instead. From this we all learn that there is nothing better than a bat, ball, and players to play and love the sport.
Well, now you know what to do if you are ever faced with having a ball, bat and a diamond field…play either softball or baseball! However, remember that they each have there separate settings, rules, equipment, and players. Finally we now know that there are many different things in the world of baseball and softball.Is this a good 6th grade essay on baseball vs. softball?zzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz…Is this a good 6th grade essay on baseball vs. softball?Too long I got bored after you hit the ballIs this a good 6th grade essay on baseball vs. softball?ya i like it...Sure, it's a really nice one. So basically you're comparing the manly sport and the womanly sport all right. But some people(such as some of my classmates %26lt;%26lt;gr.6 too!) might get bored of reading it since it's so long.You forgot to indent. Other than that it looks good.hm...remember this for next year, by the way: if you are writing a research paper, don't use pronouns (e.g. she, he, it, they, we), especially the word %26quot;I%26quot;! you have a good hook, but the thesis could be worded better. your conclusion is good, but a bit long... i like this essay...even though i don't really enjoy sports. it could be better, but it's a well-written 6th grade essay.Yeah I guess ! I dont like Baseball or Softball though !not badI'd give you a B -yes its pretty good for a 6th grader but always remeber keep it short but still get your point across...
but really a teacher could fall asleep while are reading it so keep it short!!!!What are down comforters creating file
Baseball and softball settings are kind of like the game Mirror Magic. You see the same thing, but if you look more closely there are some things that are different. Many lucky ones know the feeling of anxiety building as you walk done the darkened hallway, the smell of the fresh cut grass growing stronger and stronger, then finally the light opens up in front of you presenting the stadium ahead. This is the setting for American loving sports, baseball and softball. That’s right they may be different sports but they have the same setting. The tan line of the diamond on the grassy field is where they play. Though the game being performed may stink, and though it’s not your favorite team playing, no real American would turn down tickets to a game of either baseball or softball. That is why I say that the stadium shall always be full as long as the games of baseball and softball don’t die as passes by time. Both baseball and softball may be played on a diamond but they both don’t play the same game of food! Though there may be no insane man throwing peanuts yelling “Heads up!” like there usually would be at a baseball game, there is a snack bar to fill the hungry needs of fans at a softball game. So you may be walking into the same picture when visiting either a baseball or a softball game, but we all know they are different in their own way!
Each game needs rules and though baseball and softball are quite similar in many ways, they are also different. Football, dodge ball, soccer…these are all sports with the most similar rules? Well they are baseball and softball. Imagine how boring a sport would be without players! Luckily baseball and softball both have 9-10 players. However, all the 9-10 players on each team can’t stay in one spot! That is why both baseball and softball have infielders and outfielders. Don’t hate the game cause they ‘aint the same! The differences are why we love ‘em! For those who don’t innings are when both teams of each game get to play, and while baseball has 9 innings softball has 7 innings. Overhand throws and underhand throws are two completely different things. One is more powerful, while the other one…not so much. So if you are wondering which has the more powerful throw, its baseball which uses the overhand throw, while softball uses the underhand throw? Though some may not like the rules and others think it’s unfair we still follow them with the kindness of our hearts.
With no equipment and no players there would be nothing left but a dusty, empty field with crickets chirping in the background. However, I thank god every day that mankind solved that problem by creating equipment and having players! Bats and balls aren’t the only thing similar in the topic of baseball vs. softball. Sliding is a useful trick in both baseball and softball, but to do this safely, no matter what sport you need knee pads for the least; and both baseball and softball use them! Weather some people consider it “manly” or not, both sports have their difference. Baseball is considered to be a “manly sport” by many people. However, softball takes the lead as a “womanly sport”. I guess that’s why most boys join baseball while girls join softball. Due to the “manliness” of baseball the ball is a hard white ball with red-stitched like lines on either side, yet softball has a softer yellow ball instead. From this we all learn that there is nothing better than a bat, ball, and players to play and love the sport.
Well, now you know what to do if you are ever faced with having a ball, bat and a diamond field…play either softball or baseball! However, remember that they each have there separate settings, rules, equipment, and players. Finally we now know that there are many different things in the world of baseball and softball.Is this a good 6th grade essay on baseball vs. softball?zzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz…Is this a good 6th grade essay on baseball vs. softball?Too long I got bored after you hit the ballIs this a good 6th grade essay on baseball vs. softball?ya i like it...Sure, it's a really nice one. So basically you're comparing the manly sport and the womanly sport all right. But some people(such as some of my classmates %26lt;%26lt;gr.6 too!) might get bored of reading it since it's so long.You forgot to indent. Other than that it looks good.hm...remember this for next year, by the way: if you are writing a research paper, don't use pronouns (e.g. she, he, it, they, we), especially the word %26quot;I%26quot;! you have a good hook, but the thesis could be worded better. your conclusion is good, but a bit long... i like this essay...even though i don't really enjoy sports. it could be better, but it's a well-written 6th grade essay.Yeah I guess ! I dont like Baseball or Softball though !not badI'd give you a B -yes its pretty good for a 6th grader but always remeber keep it short but still get your point across...
but really a teacher could fall asleep while are reading it so keep it short!!!!
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