Wednesday, October 26, 2011

Are these good lyrics?

Do you like these lyrics? I'm in 6th grade, so dont be too mean. Well, thanx for your opinion.



Roller Coaster Ride







You say yes



Then no



Your always changing your mind



Sometimes fast,



Sometimes slow,



We go up and down



Now we鈥檙e turning around



Oh look



We鈥檙e upside down



Yeah, you never know what to expect







But, hey, you know what they say,







Chorus:



We鈥檙e like a roller coaster ride



There was a corkscrew there



We鈥檒l hope it鈥檚 slow for some time



I鈥檓 gonna pray



That some day



I will have it my way



Cause my life would be mended



The ride would have ended



And all we鈥檇 ever have to be



Is you and me







But right now that鈥檚 not true



There is no me and you



I鈥檓 still sick of waking up to find



That once again you鈥檝e changed your mind



And maybe in the end



You could become my friend



But I鈥檓 not gonna beg on my knees



Go ahead, do whatever you please



But just think how you could stop this ride



Although, 1000 times I鈥檝e tried







But, hey, you know what they say.







Chorus:



We鈥檙e like a roller coaster ride



There was a corkscrew there



We鈥檒l hope it鈥檚 slow for some time



I鈥檓 gonna pray



That some day



I will have it my way



Cause my life would be mended



The ride would have ended



And all we鈥檇 ever have to be



Is you and me (x2)



You and me



You and me



(slowly fade out, repeat as many times as needed)Are these good lyrics?sounds like some good high energy lyrics. are u in a band, do u play an instrument? yaya keep it up kiddo!
Are these good lyrics?
nope
Are these good lyrics?
Dont listen to these doofs above me that say its not good. I think its pretty damn awesome.
I say yea becuz these words represent what has happened to me before.
Well, they're not great, but considering your age, they're pretty damn good. I probably couldn't write at that level in sixth grade; keep it up!
that was very good u are very talented don't let anyone bring u down and whoeva say other wise for get them they aint nobody
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