ok i really need help
i am writing an essay about an event or something that changed your way you are or the way you look at life ( a life changing moment) it has to be 2000 words
i know what to write about but i just don't know how to write it like the structure of the essay
i want to write about a near death experience and about the time when the principle told me if i dont raise my grades i wouldnt be able to graduate
so how do i write these two topics in my essay ?I need help?Two life changing events in one lifetime. Different places, different contexts, totally different events, but both stunned me and gave me a major new focus to my life and the way I live it.I need help?He said I wouldn't pass...I felt like Chicken Little: My sky had fallen, as those words came from (name of your principal)'s mouth. They were so cut-and-dry...So matter-of-fact. No ear syringe could wash away THESE particles from my ears, and I KNEW IT. ( Expand how you felt about this more fully).
This day was like one (pick the time: day, night, season). Set the scene for the reader of your paper. What was happening OR what had happened to cause your near-death experience? Pretend you are telling both parts of this to your best friend or a favorite family member. Just get it on paper FIRST. Don't worry about how it sounds or the structure of it. After getting it down, punctuate it and see what needs to be broken into several paragraphs. It will work. I hope my example, for a beginning, helps you. Think A+!
