I just want to know, because I may have to change my schedule. I have good grades, haven't taken the ACT or SAT yet. This may be my only downside.
Thanks!!**How Important is the rigor of your school record when applying to a univeristy?The more-competitive colleges will look at how many AP courses you have taken compared with how many were available to you. In other words, did you challenge yourself or take the easy road?**How Important is the rigor of your school record when applying to a univeristy?Colleges are looking for students who are leaders and who push themselves. So taking honors and AP level classes look very good to colleges.
Wednesday, October 26, 2011
Are these good lyrics?
Do you like these lyrics? I'm in 6th grade, so dont be too mean. Well, thanx for your opinion.
Roller Coaster Ride
You say yes
Then no
Your always changing your mind
Sometimes fast,
Sometimes slow,
We go up and down
Now we鈥檙e turning around
Oh look
We鈥檙e upside down
Yeah, you never know what to expect
But, hey, you know what they say,
Chorus:
We鈥檙e like a roller coaster ride
There was a corkscrew there
We鈥檒l hope it鈥檚 slow for some time
I鈥檓 gonna pray
That some day
I will have it my way
Cause my life would be mended
The ride would have ended
And all we鈥檇 ever have to be
Is you and me
But right now that鈥檚 not true
There is no me and you
I鈥檓 still sick of waking up to find
That once again you鈥檝e changed your mind
And maybe in the end
You could become my friend
But I鈥檓 not gonna beg on my knees
Go ahead, do whatever you please
But just think how you could stop this ride
Although, 1000 times I鈥檝e tried
But, hey, you know what they say.
Chorus:
We鈥檙e like a roller coaster ride
There was a corkscrew there
We鈥檒l hope it鈥檚 slow for some time
I鈥檓 gonna pray
That some day
I will have it my way
Cause my life would be mended
The ride would have ended
And all we鈥檇 ever have to be
Is you and me (x2)
You and me
You and me
(slowly fade out, repeat as many times as needed)Are these good lyrics?sounds like some good high energy lyrics. are u in a band, do u play an instrument? yaya keep it up kiddo!Are these good lyrics?nopeAre these good lyrics?Dont listen to these doofs above me that say its not good. I think its pretty damn awesome.I say yea becuz these words represent what has happened to me before.Well, they're not great, but considering your age, they're pretty damn good. I probably couldn't write at that level in sixth grade; keep it up!that was very good u are very talented don't let anyone bring u down and whoeva say other wise for get them they aint nobodyapply parental controls makeaconnectiontomylaptop
Roller Coaster Ride
You say yes
Then no
Your always changing your mind
Sometimes fast,
Sometimes slow,
We go up and down
Now we鈥檙e turning around
Oh look
We鈥檙e upside down
Yeah, you never know what to expect
But, hey, you know what they say,
Chorus:
We鈥檙e like a roller coaster ride
There was a corkscrew there
We鈥檒l hope it鈥檚 slow for some time
I鈥檓 gonna pray
That some day
I will have it my way
Cause my life would be mended
The ride would have ended
And all we鈥檇 ever have to be
Is you and me
But right now that鈥檚 not true
There is no me and you
I鈥檓 still sick of waking up to find
That once again you鈥檝e changed your mind
And maybe in the end
You could become my friend
But I鈥檓 not gonna beg on my knees
Go ahead, do whatever you please
But just think how you could stop this ride
Although, 1000 times I鈥檝e tried
But, hey, you know what they say.
Chorus:
We鈥檙e like a roller coaster ride
There was a corkscrew there
We鈥檒l hope it鈥檚 slow for some time
I鈥檓 gonna pray
That some day
I will have it my way
Cause my life would be mended
The ride would have ended
And all we鈥檇 ever have to be
Is you and me (x2)
You and me
You and me
(slowly fade out, repeat as many times as needed)Are these good lyrics?sounds like some good high energy lyrics. are u in a band, do u play an instrument? yaya keep it up kiddo!Are these good lyrics?nopeAre these good lyrics?Dont listen to these doofs above me that say its not good. I think its pretty damn awesome.I say yea becuz these words represent what has happened to me before.Well, they're not great, but considering your age, they're pretty damn good. I probably couldn't write at that level in sixth grade; keep it up!that was very good u are very talented don't let anyone bring u down and whoeva say other wise for get them they aint nobody
Scene kids: how do you change groups? who to pick as your friends when you turn scene?
alright heres the deal; i want to become scene, everyone says i fit the part, and as far as im concerned, i basically am scene (i just need to get the makeup down.) but all of my friends except for one are NOT scene. and im going into 7th grade. and everyone knows that scene kids usually only hang out with their own group. and there arent a lo of scene girls and boys that go to my school. so i wanted to know who should i choose to be my friends (the emos/skaters or whatever) and how should i exactly change... %26quot;cliques.%26quot; ughh that word is ****** annoying. so i wanna know how other scene kids changed groups or whatever :DScene kids: how do you change groups? who to pick as your friends when you turn scene?no matter what clique your in it shouldn't matter what clique your friends are in people should like you for you not for they way you dress or who your friends with. No one likes scene kids anyways there all fakes that just try to be cool and fit in be yourself and thats how you get true friends.Scene kids: how do you change groups? who to pick as your friends when you turn scene?you are in 7th i didn't know all that crap existed yet
i am pretty sure if your friends are your friends you should still be friends with them. why dump your old friends if you just change your style?Scene kids: how do you change groups? who to pick as your friends when you turn scene?Wait until high school.Why would you want to be %26quot;scene%26quot; at all? Just be yourself, it sounds lame but you would be more lame to change you friends just because they aren't %26quot;scene%26quot;.
Dress how you want do your makeup how you want just don't try to conform to some group of people who think they are better then everyone else because their hair is big and their pants are tight.this is the stupidest question ive ever seen
enough saidOkay, so you think the word cliques is annoying, but you don't think scene is annoying? You're obviously trying to be someone your not like the other 60% of our population. Be yourself. You shouldn't diss your real friends just because of your style, and who people say 'scene kids' should hang out with. If you like stuff that supposedly 'scene kids' like then fine, but don't call yourself scene and don't change your friends, hair, fashion, style, opinion, etc. just because that's what 'a true scene' is supposed to do.
UGH. Labels.
i am pretty sure if your friends are your friends you should still be friends with them. why dump your old friends if you just change your style?Scene kids: how do you change groups? who to pick as your friends when you turn scene?Wait until high school.Why would you want to be %26quot;scene%26quot; at all? Just be yourself, it sounds lame but you would be more lame to change you friends just because they aren't %26quot;scene%26quot;.
Dress how you want do your makeup how you want just don't try to conform to some group of people who think they are better then everyone else because their hair is big and their pants are tight.this is the stupidest question ive ever seen
enough saidOkay, so you think the word cliques is annoying, but you don't think scene is annoying? You're obviously trying to be someone your not like the other 60% of our population. Be yourself. You shouldn't diss your real friends just because of your style, and who people say 'scene kids' should hang out with. If you like stuff that supposedly 'scene kids' like then fine, but don't call yourself scene and don't change your friends, hair, fashion, style, opinion, etc. just because that's what 'a true scene' is supposed to do.
UGH. Labels.
PLZ!! Help me with this?
I know this is in the wrong section but I'm not getting responses anywhere else... For my 11th grade English class I had to write a college applicant essay on the topic “something that has happened and how it changed your life” it had to be around 300 words so please tell me what I could take out. Please grade this essay and tell me what grade it got. Thanks a lot!
Waking up to your cousin's voice saying %26quot;they took your mom away in an ambulance,%26quot; is one of the worst ways to wake up; especially when you are only seven years old. On the night my mom was taken to the hospital many tests were run on her to see why she suddenly had a very violent seizure. Soon after, they diagnosed her with a cancerous brain tumor. She held strong through all the surgeries and chemotherapy sessions that went on for two years. After all the miserable hospital visits she got tired of it and wanted to stay home and forget about treatment - the doctor gave her three months to live. It was almost impossible to crawl out of bed every morning just because I knew that my mom might not be with me anymore. She lived for another six months before she finally passed away. I woke up one morning and walked into the living room where my mom had been living for four months, too weak to walk into her bedroom. My grandmother's eyes were misty and I could tell something was wrong. My dad softly called me over and I shook my head and turned to leave. No news was best for me. My dad called my name again and I turned and walked over to him. He gently sat me on his lap and told me that my mom hadn't made it through the night. I blinked back tears as I ran from the room. I went in my closet and cried. Now I look back at my nine year old self and realize that I knew it was coming, but nobody could ever be prepared for that. My dad taught me not to give up on those you love, but to help them through things the best you can. He was always there for my mom and for us kids. He took care of my mom, the house, and us, and even worked from home so he could be right there. I learned about the will to live and the value of life from my mom who wanted to hold on long enough for us to remember her. This experience in my life has made me stronger. I still go through rough times but I know the importance of looking at the positive side of things. My life was changed forever, but my experience has left me with a positive attitude on life and I thank my mom and dad for it.
PLZ!! Help me with this?i went ahead and changed a few things.
Waking up to your cousin's voice saying %26quot;They took your mom away in an ambulance,%26quot; is one of the worst ways to wake up; especially when you are only seven years old. On the night my mom was taken to the hospital many tests were run to see why she had suddenly had a very violent seizure. Soon after, they diagnosed her with a cancerous brain tumor. She held strong through all the subsequent surgeries and chemotherapy sessions for two years. After all the miserable hospital visits she got tired of it and wanted to stay home; forgetting about treatment - the doctor gave her three months to live. It was almost impossible to crawl out of bed every morning just because I knew that my mom might not be with me anymore. She lived for another six months before she finally passed away. I woke up one morning and walked into the living room, the very room that my mom had been living in for four months, too weak to walk into her bedroom. My grandmother's eyes were misty and I could tell something was wrong. My dad softly called me over and I shook my head and turned to leave, no news was better than bad news. My dad called my name again so I turned and walked over to him. He gently sat me on his lap and told me that mom hadn't made it through the night. I blinked back tears as I fled the room, running to my closet crying. Now I look back at my nine year old self and realize that I knew it was coming, but nobody could ever be prepared for that. My dad taught me not to give up on those you love, but to help them through things the best you can. He was always there for my mom and for us kids. He took care of my mom, the house, and us, and even worked from home so he could be right there with us. I learned about the will to live and the value of life from my mom, who wanted to hold on long enough for us to remember her. This experience in my life has made me stronger. I still go through rough times, but now I know the importance of looking at the positive side of things. My life was changed forever, but my experience has left me with a positive attitude on life, and I thank my mom and dad for that.
you should read through this again and see what else about ti you want to change. or just disregard this and use the original. hope i helped.
PLZ!! Help me with this?I didn't read it but i give it an A for effort.PLZ!! Help me with this?sounds good write it upHow many words is this? This is excellent by the way.
But if you need less words you can take out when you tried leaving the room and/or hiding in your closet? Just a suggestion.
It was a very moving read though. I liked it... that sounds kinda mean... :/
I give it an A definitely.
--BrianI think this is a great essay. You described this event in your life and paid close attention to the detail. Good job, I think you will pass without problem.wow that made be cry i like it...i would give ua A+++++++ you wrote with so much emotion ..it cam from your heart...anything that comes from your heart is always gonna be great! Its your true feelings..something that has affected u and some kind of way ..WTG U!! I am only in middle school but that was fantastic. I give it an A+.
Waking up to your cousin's voice saying %26quot;they took your mom away in an ambulance,%26quot; is one of the worst ways to wake up; especially when you are only seven years old. On the night my mom was taken to the hospital many tests were run on her to see why she suddenly had a very violent seizure. Soon after, they diagnosed her with a cancerous brain tumor. She held strong through all the surgeries and chemotherapy sessions that went on for two years. After all the miserable hospital visits she got tired of it and wanted to stay home and forget about treatment - the doctor gave her three months to live. It was almost impossible to crawl out of bed every morning just because I knew that my mom might not be with me anymore. She lived for another six months before she finally passed away. I woke up one morning and walked into the living room where my mom had been living for four months, too weak to walk into her bedroom. My grandmother's eyes were misty and I could tell something was wrong. My dad softly called me over and I shook my head and turned to leave. No news was best for me. My dad called my name again and I turned and walked over to him. He gently sat me on his lap and told me that my mom hadn't made it through the night. I blinked back tears as I ran from the room. I went in my closet and cried. Now I look back at my nine year old self and realize that I knew it was coming, but nobody could ever be prepared for that. My dad taught me not to give up on those you love, but to help them through things the best you can. He was always there for my mom and for us kids. He took care of my mom, the house, and us, and even worked from home so he could be right there. I learned about the will to live and the value of life from my mom who wanted to hold on long enough for us to remember her. This experience in my life has made me stronger. I still go through rough times but I know the importance of looking at the positive side of things. My life was changed forever, but my experience has left me with a positive attitude on life and I thank my mom and dad for it.
PLZ!! Help me with this?i went ahead and changed a few things.
Waking up to your cousin's voice saying %26quot;They took your mom away in an ambulance,%26quot; is one of the worst ways to wake up; especially when you are only seven years old. On the night my mom was taken to the hospital many tests were run to see why she had suddenly had a very violent seizure. Soon after, they diagnosed her with a cancerous brain tumor. She held strong through all the subsequent surgeries and chemotherapy sessions for two years. After all the miserable hospital visits she got tired of it and wanted to stay home; forgetting about treatment - the doctor gave her three months to live. It was almost impossible to crawl out of bed every morning just because I knew that my mom might not be with me anymore. She lived for another six months before she finally passed away. I woke up one morning and walked into the living room, the very room that my mom had been living in for four months, too weak to walk into her bedroom. My grandmother's eyes were misty and I could tell something was wrong. My dad softly called me over and I shook my head and turned to leave, no news was better than bad news. My dad called my name again so I turned and walked over to him. He gently sat me on his lap and told me that mom hadn't made it through the night. I blinked back tears as I fled the room, running to my closet crying. Now I look back at my nine year old self and realize that I knew it was coming, but nobody could ever be prepared for that. My dad taught me not to give up on those you love, but to help them through things the best you can. He was always there for my mom and for us kids. He took care of my mom, the house, and us, and even worked from home so he could be right there with us. I learned about the will to live and the value of life from my mom, who wanted to hold on long enough for us to remember her. This experience in my life has made me stronger. I still go through rough times, but now I know the importance of looking at the positive side of things. My life was changed forever, but my experience has left me with a positive attitude on life, and I thank my mom and dad for that.
you should read through this again and see what else about ti you want to change. or just disregard this and use the original. hope i helped.
PLZ!! Help me with this?I didn't read it but i give it an A for effort.PLZ!! Help me with this?sounds good write it upHow many words is this? This is excellent by the way.
But if you need less words you can take out when you tried leaving the room and/or hiding in your closet? Just a suggestion.
It was a very moving read though. I liked it... that sounds kinda mean... :/
I give it an A definitely.
--BrianI think this is a great essay. You described this event in your life and paid close attention to the detail. Good job, I think you will pass without problem.wow that made be cry i like it...i would give ua A+++++++ you wrote with so much emotion ..it cam from your heart...anything that comes from your heart is always gonna be great! Its your true feelings..something that has affected u and some kind of way ..WTG U!! I am only in middle school but that was fantastic. I give it an A+.
Please read this essay!?!!?
For my 11th grade English class I had to write a college applicant essay on the topic “something that has happened and how it changed your life” it had to be around 300 words so please tell me what I could take out. Please grade this essay and tell me what grade it got. Thanks a lot!
Waking up to your cousin's voice saying %26quot;they took your mom away in an ambulance,%26quot; is one of the worst ways to wake up; especially when you are only seven years old. On the night my mom was taken to the hospital many tests were run on her to see why she suddenly had a very violent seizure. Soon after, they diagnosed her with a cancerous brain tumor. She held strong through all the surgeries and chemotherapy sessions that went on for two years. After all the miserable hospital visits she got tired of it and wanted to stay home and forget about treatment - the doctor gave her three months to live. It was almost impossible to crawl out of bed every morning just because I knew that my mom might not be with me anymore. She lived for another six months before she finally passed away. I woke up one morning and walked into the living room where my mom had been living for four months, too weak to walk into her bedroom. My grandmother's eyes were misty and I could tell something was wrong. My dad softly called me over and I shook my head and turned to leave. No news was best for me. My dad called my name again and I turned and walked over to him. He gently sat me on his lap and told me that my mom hadn't made it through the night. I blinked back tears as I ran from the room. I went in my closet and cried. Now I look back at my nine year old self and realize that I knew it was coming, but nobody could ever be prepared for that. My dad taught me not to give up on those you love, but to help them through things the best you can. He was always there for my mom and for us kids. He took care of my mom, the house, and us, and even worked from home so he could be right there. I learned about the will to live and the value of life from my mom who wanted to hold on long enough for us to remember her. This experience in my life has made me stronger. I still go through rough times but I know the importance of looking at the positive side of things. My life was changed forever, but my experience has left me with a positive attitude on life and I thank my mom and dad for it.
Please read this essay!?!!?Very nice essay. I'd give u an A-. You had a great opening and closing. It was interesting and sympathetic - studies show that when there is sad %26quot;sob%26quot; story, the teachers tend to give you a better grade. Im assuming you captolization is not what you wrote, because in the first line, %26quot;they%26quot; should be captilized. Also needs better punctuation - you hold back on your commas. If that is not what is really on your computer because you typed it fast, you get A- because your vocabulary is about an 8'th grader's (no offense) and you need better openings than %26quot;I%26quot; %26quot;My Dad%26quot; %26quot;My Life%26quot; %26quot;My grandmothers%26quot; and ya. You need more variety.Please read this essay!?!!?G-Please read this essay!?!!?Very touching! I really think you did a great job!wow. you have great writing skills and it hits the heart, which is kinda cheap for college applications, but it works. i would give you a 90 on itcombine the sentences %26quot;My dad softly called me over andi shook my head....%26quot;
instead say %26quot;As my dad attempted to beckon me to him, i turned to leave, fearing my oldest nightmare was about to come true; but h called my name again.%26quot;
its a great and moving essay. If it were up to me, I wouldn't cut any part out. However, you can shorten sentences (like i did) and combine them. Remeber, it doesn't matter how long words are; people tend to limit themselves to their most basic vocabulary when editing. good luck!
Waking up to your cousin's voice saying %26quot;they took your mom away in an ambulance,%26quot; is one of the worst ways to wake up; especially when you are only seven years old. On the night my mom was taken to the hospital many tests were run on her to see why she suddenly had a very violent seizure. Soon after, they diagnosed her with a cancerous brain tumor. She held strong through all the surgeries and chemotherapy sessions that went on for two years. After all the miserable hospital visits she got tired of it and wanted to stay home and forget about treatment - the doctor gave her three months to live. It was almost impossible to crawl out of bed every morning just because I knew that my mom might not be with me anymore. She lived for another six months before she finally passed away. I woke up one morning and walked into the living room where my mom had been living for four months, too weak to walk into her bedroom. My grandmother's eyes were misty and I could tell something was wrong. My dad softly called me over and I shook my head and turned to leave. No news was best for me. My dad called my name again and I turned and walked over to him. He gently sat me on his lap and told me that my mom hadn't made it through the night. I blinked back tears as I ran from the room. I went in my closet and cried. Now I look back at my nine year old self and realize that I knew it was coming, but nobody could ever be prepared for that. My dad taught me not to give up on those you love, but to help them through things the best you can. He was always there for my mom and for us kids. He took care of my mom, the house, and us, and even worked from home so he could be right there. I learned about the will to live and the value of life from my mom who wanted to hold on long enough for us to remember her. This experience in my life has made me stronger. I still go through rough times but I know the importance of looking at the positive side of things. My life was changed forever, but my experience has left me with a positive attitude on life and I thank my mom and dad for it.
Please read this essay!?!!?Very nice essay. I'd give u an A-. You had a great opening and closing. It was interesting and sympathetic - studies show that when there is sad %26quot;sob%26quot; story, the teachers tend to give you a better grade. Im assuming you captolization is not what you wrote, because in the first line, %26quot;they%26quot; should be captilized. Also needs better punctuation - you hold back on your commas. If that is not what is really on your computer because you typed it fast, you get A- because your vocabulary is about an 8'th grader's (no offense) and you need better openings than %26quot;I%26quot; %26quot;My Dad%26quot; %26quot;My Life%26quot; %26quot;My grandmothers%26quot; and ya. You need more variety.Please read this essay!?!!?G-Please read this essay!?!!?Very touching! I really think you did a great job!wow. you have great writing skills and it hits the heart, which is kinda cheap for college applications, but it works. i would give you a 90 on itcombine the sentences %26quot;My dad softly called me over andi shook my head....%26quot;
instead say %26quot;As my dad attempted to beckon me to him, i turned to leave, fearing my oldest nightmare was about to come true; but h called my name again.%26quot;
its a great and moving essay. If it were up to me, I wouldn't cut any part out. However, you can shorten sentences (like i did) and combine them. Remeber, it doesn't matter how long words are; people tend to limit themselves to their most basic vocabulary when editing. good luck!
How to meet new people when you have meet everyone in your grade?
i really do want to hand out with new people but i have hanged out with all the different people n my grade so its hard because they think it is weird (they are all cliquey) like if you tryed hanging out with them they would think something is up not that you are just trying to be friendly
i try hanging out with everyone but it ussually dose not work out
i know you probally think i am stupid from my other questions its just hard to get along with me and i have tried changing the way i am but i gave up after years thank you for the helpful answersHow to meet new people when you have meet everyone in your grade?Judging from the way my sister meets new people, places like the local skating rink and a close by arcade seem to attract kids from all over the place.How to meet new people when you have meet everyone in your grade?i was just like You still like you i like to hang out with everybody sometimes it gets a lil crazy this person don't like that person but you want to be friends with both, just stay true to yourself at the end of the day the bell rings and you go home. whoever you want to chill with that day than that's who you chill with don't bother yourself on what others say.
i try hanging out with everyone but it ussually dose not work out
i know you probally think i am stupid from my other questions its just hard to get along with me and i have tried changing the way i am but i gave up after years thank you for the helpful answersHow to meet new people when you have meet everyone in your grade?Judging from the way my sister meets new people, places like the local skating rink and a close by arcade seem to attract kids from all over the place.How to meet new people when you have meet everyone in your grade?i was just like You still like you i like to hang out with everybody sometimes it gets a lil crazy this person don't like that person but you want to be friends with both, just stay true to yourself at the end of the day the bell rings and you go home. whoever you want to chill with that day than that's who you chill with don't bother yourself on what others say.
Grade 12 Biology Question !?
Why is it important when changing your diet to know how the cells in your body will react to the introduction of new substances or the removal of other substances?
i know this is a lot, but i would greatly appreciate help :)Grade 12 Biology Question !?For example, diabetics must take great precaution in limiting the amount of simple sugars as too much will cause a spike in insulin and know what foods may save them from diabetic coma's.How to fix bleach accident on comforter chi hair
i know this is a lot, but i would greatly appreciate help :)Grade 12 Biology Question !?For example, diabetics must take great precaution in limiting the amount of simple sugars as too much will cause a spike in insulin and know what foods may save them from diabetic coma's.
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