Wednesday, October 26, 2011

**How Important is the rigor of your school record when applying to a univeristy?

I just want to know, because I may have to change my schedule. I have good grades, haven't taken the ACT or SAT yet. This may be my only downside.





Thanks!!**How Important is the rigor of your school record when applying to a univeristy?The more-competitive colleges will look at how many AP courses you have taken compared with how many were available to you. In other words, did you challenge yourself or take the easy road?
**How Important is the rigor of your school record when applying to a univeristy?
Colleges are looking for students who are leaders and who push themselves. So taking honors and AP level classes look very good to colleges.

Are these good lyrics?

Do you like these lyrics? I'm in 6th grade, so dont be too mean. Well, thanx for your opinion.



Roller Coaster Ride







You say yes



Then no



Your always changing your mind



Sometimes fast,



Sometimes slow,



We go up and down



Now we鈥檙e turning around



Oh look



We鈥檙e upside down



Yeah, you never know what to expect







But, hey, you know what they say,







Chorus:



We鈥檙e like a roller coaster ride



There was a corkscrew there



We鈥檒l hope it鈥檚 slow for some time



I鈥檓 gonna pray



That some day



I will have it my way



Cause my life would be mended



The ride would have ended



And all we鈥檇 ever have to be



Is you and me







But right now that鈥檚 not true



There is no me and you



I鈥檓 still sick of waking up to find



That once again you鈥檝e changed your mind



And maybe in the end



You could become my friend



But I鈥檓 not gonna beg on my knees



Go ahead, do whatever you please



But just think how you could stop this ride



Although, 1000 times I鈥檝e tried







But, hey, you know what they say.







Chorus:



We鈥檙e like a roller coaster ride



There was a corkscrew there



We鈥檒l hope it鈥檚 slow for some time



I鈥檓 gonna pray



That some day



I will have it my way



Cause my life would be mended



The ride would have ended



And all we鈥檇 ever have to be



Is you and me (x2)



You and me



You and me



(slowly fade out, repeat as many times as needed)Are these good lyrics?sounds like some good high energy lyrics. are u in a band, do u play an instrument? yaya keep it up kiddo!
Are these good lyrics?
nope
Are these good lyrics?
Dont listen to these doofs above me that say its not good. I think its pretty damn awesome.
I say yea becuz these words represent what has happened to me before.
Well, they're not great, but considering your age, they're pretty damn good. I probably couldn't write at that level in sixth grade; keep it up!
that was very good u are very talented don't let anyone bring u down and whoeva say other wise for get them they aint nobody
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  • PLZ!! Help me with this?

    I know this is in the wrong section but I'm not getting responses anywhere else... For my 11th grade English class I had to write a college applicant essay on the topic “something that has happened and how it changed your life” it had to be around 300 words so please tell me what I could take out. Please grade this essay and tell me what grade it got. Thanks a lot!



    Waking up to your cousin's voice saying %26quot;they took your mom away in an ambulance,%26quot; is one of the worst ways to wake up; especially when you are only seven years old. On the night my mom was taken to the hospital many tests were run on her to see why she suddenly had a very violent seizure. Soon after, they diagnosed her with a cancerous brain tumor. She held strong through all the surgeries and chemotherapy sessions that went on for two years. After all the miserable hospital visits she got tired of it and wanted to stay home and forget about treatment - the doctor gave her three months to live. It was almost impossible to crawl out of bed every morning just because I knew that my mom might not be with me anymore. She lived for another six months before she finally passed away. I woke up one morning and walked into the living room where my mom had been living for four months, too weak to walk into her bedroom. My grandmother's eyes were misty and I could tell something was wrong. My dad softly called me over and I shook my head and turned to leave. No news was best for me. My dad called my name again and I turned and walked over to him. He gently sat me on his lap and told me that my mom hadn't made it through the night. I blinked back tears as I ran from the room. I went in my closet and cried. Now I look back at my nine year old self and realize that I knew it was coming, but nobody could ever be prepared for that. My dad taught me not to give up on those you love, but to help them through things the best you can. He was always there for my mom and for us kids. He took care of my mom, the house, and us, and even worked from home so he could be right there. I learned about the will to live and the value of life from my mom who wanted to hold on long enough for us to remember her. This experience in my life has made me stronger. I still go through rough times but I know the importance of looking at the positive side of things. My life was changed forever, but my experience has left me with a positive attitude on life and I thank my mom and dad for it.

    PLZ!! Help me with this?i went ahead and changed a few things.



    Waking up to your cousin's voice saying %26quot;They took your mom away in an ambulance,%26quot; is one of the worst ways to wake up; especially when you are only seven years old. On the night my mom was taken to the hospital many tests were run to see why she had suddenly had a very violent seizure. Soon after, they diagnosed her with a cancerous brain tumor. She held strong through all the subsequent surgeries and chemotherapy sessions for two years. After all the miserable hospital visits she got tired of it and wanted to stay home; forgetting about treatment - the doctor gave her three months to live. It was almost impossible to crawl out of bed every morning just because I knew that my mom might not be with me anymore. She lived for another six months before she finally passed away. I woke up one morning and walked into the living room, the very room that my mom had been living in for four months, too weak to walk into her bedroom. My grandmother's eyes were misty and I could tell something was wrong. My dad softly called me over and I shook my head and turned to leave, no news was better than bad news. My dad called my name again so I turned and walked over to him. He gently sat me on his lap and told me that mom hadn't made it through the night. I blinked back tears as I fled the room, running to my closet crying. Now I look back at my nine year old self and realize that I knew it was coming, but nobody could ever be prepared for that. My dad taught me not to give up on those you love, but to help them through things the best you can. He was always there for my mom and for us kids. He took care of my mom, the house, and us, and even worked from home so he could be right there with us. I learned about the will to live and the value of life from my mom, who wanted to hold on long enough for us to remember her. This experience in my life has made me stronger. I still go through rough times, but now I know the importance of looking at the positive side of things. My life was changed forever, but my experience has left me with a positive attitude on life, and I thank my mom and dad for that.



    you should read through this again and see what else about ti you want to change. or just disregard this and use the original. hope i helped.


    PLZ!! Help me with this?
    I didn't read it but i give it an A for effort.
    PLZ!! Help me with this?
    sounds good write it up
    How many words is this? This is excellent by the way.

    But if you need less words you can take out when you tried leaving the room and/or hiding in your closet? Just a suggestion.



    It was a very moving read though. I liked it... that sounds kinda mean... :/





    I give it an A definitely.





    --Brian
    I think this is a great essay. You described this event in your life and paid close attention to the detail. Good job, I think you will pass without problem.
    wow that made be cry i like it...i would give ua A+++++++ you wrote with so much emotion ..it cam from your heart...anything that comes from your heart is always gonna be great! Its your true feelings..something that has affected u and some kind of way ..WTG U!!
    I am only in middle school but that was fantastic. I give it an A+.

    Please read this essay!?!!?

    For my 11th grade English class I had to write a college applicant essay on the topic “something that has happened and how it changed your life” it had to be around 300 words so please tell me what I could take out. Please grade this essay and tell me what grade it got. Thanks a lot!



    Waking up to your cousin's voice saying %26quot;they took your mom away in an ambulance,%26quot; is one of the worst ways to wake up; especially when you are only seven years old. On the night my mom was taken to the hospital many tests were run on her to see why she suddenly had a very violent seizure. Soon after, they diagnosed her with a cancerous brain tumor. She held strong through all the surgeries and chemotherapy sessions that went on for two years. After all the miserable hospital visits she got tired of it and wanted to stay home and forget about treatment - the doctor gave her three months to live. It was almost impossible to crawl out of bed every morning just because I knew that my mom might not be with me anymore. She lived for another six months before she finally passed away. I woke up one morning and walked into the living room where my mom had been living for four months, too weak to walk into her bedroom. My grandmother's eyes were misty and I could tell something was wrong. My dad softly called me over and I shook my head and turned to leave. No news was best for me. My dad called my name again and I turned and walked over to him. He gently sat me on his lap and told me that my mom hadn't made it through the night. I blinked back tears as I ran from the room. I went in my closet and cried. Now I look back at my nine year old self and realize that I knew it was coming, but nobody could ever be prepared for that. My dad taught me not to give up on those you love, but to help them through things the best you can. He was always there for my mom and for us kids. He took care of my mom, the house, and us, and even worked from home so he could be right there. I learned about the will to live and the value of life from my mom who wanted to hold on long enough for us to remember her. This experience in my life has made me stronger. I still go through rough times but I know the importance of looking at the positive side of things. My life was changed forever, but my experience has left me with a positive attitude on life and I thank my mom and dad for it.

    Please read this essay!?!!?Very nice essay. I'd give u an A-. You had a great opening and closing. It was interesting and sympathetic - studies show that when there is sad %26quot;sob%26quot; story, the teachers tend to give you a better grade. Im assuming you captolization is not what you wrote, because in the first line, %26quot;they%26quot; should be captilized. Also needs better punctuation - you hold back on your commas. If that is not what is really on your computer because you typed it fast, you get A- because your vocabulary is about an 8'th grader's (no offense) and you need better openings than %26quot;I%26quot; %26quot;My Dad%26quot; %26quot;My Life%26quot; %26quot;My grandmothers%26quot; and ya. You need more variety.
    Please read this essay!?!!?
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    Please read this essay!?!!?
    Very touching! I really think you did a great job!
    wow. you have great writing skills and it hits the heart, which is kinda cheap for college applications, but it works. i would give you a 90 on it
    combine the sentences %26quot;My dad softly called me over andi shook my head....%26quot;

    instead say %26quot;As my dad attempted to beckon me to him, i turned to leave, fearing my oldest nightmare was about to come true; but h called my name again.%26quot;



    its a great and moving essay. If it were up to me, I wouldn't cut any part out. However, you can shorten sentences (like i did) and combine them. Remeber, it doesn't matter how long words are; people tend to limit themselves to their most basic vocabulary when editing. good luck!

    How to meet new people when you have meet everyone in your grade?

    i really do want to hand out with new people but i have hanged out with all the different people n my grade so its hard because they think it is weird (they are all cliquey) like if you tryed hanging out with them they would think something is up not that you are just trying to be friendly



    i try hanging out with everyone but it ussually dose not work out



    i know you probally think i am stupid from my other questions its just hard to get along with me and i have tried changing the way i am but i gave up after years thank you for the helpful answersHow to meet new people when you have meet everyone in your grade?Judging from the way my sister meets new people, places like the local skating rink and a close by arcade seem to attract kids from all over the place.
    How to meet new people when you have meet everyone in your grade?
    i was just like You still like you i like to hang out with everybody sometimes it gets a lil crazy this person don't like that person but you want to be friends with both, just stay true to yourself at the end of the day the bell rings and you go home. whoever you want to chill with that day than that's who you chill with don't bother yourself on what others say.

    Grade 12 Biology Question !?

    Why is it important when changing your diet to know how the cells in your body will react to the introduction of new substances or the removal of other substances?



    i know this is a lot, but i would greatly appreciate help :)Grade 12 Biology Question !?For example, diabetics must take great precaution in limiting the amount of simple sugars as too much will cause a spike in insulin and know what foods may save them from diabetic coma's.
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  • What would your grade be for this paper for a social science research paper that i am just summarizing and an?

    analyzing.









    Assignment # 4:

    Biochemical Changes In Brain and Other Tissues of Young Adult Female Mice From Fluoride In Adult Female Adult Female from Fluoride in Their Drinking Water



    1. Q: Who conducted the current study?

    A: Bhatnagar, Rao, Saxena, Bhatnagar, Meena, Barbar, Chouhan, and Vimal conducted the current study (Bhatnagar, Rao, Saxena, Bhatnagar, Meena, Barbar, Chouhan, %26amp; Vimal, 2006).

    2. Q: What is (are) the source(s) of study funding, if any?

    A: The study does not mention any source of funding (Bhatnagar, Rao, Saxena, Bhatnagar, Meena, Barbar, Chouhan, %26amp; Vimal, 2006).

    3. Q: What is the overall purpose of this study?

    A: The overall purpose of this study is to study the effects of two different F concentrations in drinking water on neurotransmitter enzymes, antioxidant enzymes, and lipid peroxidation in mice (Bhatnagar, Rao, Saxena, Bhatnagar, Meena, Barbar, Chouhan, %26amp; Vimal, 2006).

    4. Q: What is the research strategy used (i.e., Experiment, Survey, Field Research, and/or Secondary Data Analysis)?

    A: The research strategy used is “experimental”, yet it is really a pre-experimental design since it has a risk of confounding due to no randomization designed. If randomization were used then there would be a genuine experimental design and control for confounding (Bhatnagar, Rao, Saxena, Bhatnagar, Meena, Barbar, Chouhan, %26amp; Vimal, 2006).

    5. Q: What type of study is conducted? (e.g., Exploratory, Explanatory, Descriptive)

    A: The type of study that is being conducted is a combination of exploratory and explanatory (Bhatnagar, Rao, Saxena, Bhatnagar, Meena, Barbar, Chouhan, and Vimal, 2006).

    6. Q: What is the unit being studied?

    A: The unit being studies is one-month old female Swiss albino mice (Bhatnagar, Rao, Saxena, Bhatnagar, Meena, Barbar, Chouhan, %26amp; Vimal, 2006).

    7. Q: What are the independent and dependent variables? Are manipulation checks used for the independent variable? How are the independent variable and dependent variables operationalized?

    A: The independent variables are body parts, which consist of the brain, liver, and calf, and the second independent variable is group assignment. The dependent variable is AchE (DOD), BchE (DOD), SOD (% inhibition of NBT reduction), CAT (mmoles H2O2 utilized/min/mg of protein), MDA (nmoles/mL), Ascorbic acid (mg/100mL), and Total protein (mg/mL) (Bhatnagar, Rao, Saxena, Bhatnagar, Meena, Barbar, Chouhan, %26amp; Vimal, 2006). Manipulation checks are used for the independent variables. The independent variable was operationalized by. The dependent variables was operationalized by having biochemical estimated by using standard methods to conduct for AchE (E.C. 3.1.1.7.) (Bhatnagar, Rao, Saxena, Bhatnagar, Meena, Barbar, Chouhan, and Vimal, 2006).

    8. Q: State the null hypotheses (cf., tables1-3).

    A: Fluoride level in drinking water has no impact on antioxidants levels, neurotransmitters, total protein level, and vitamin level in the brain, liver, and/ or calf muscle (Bhatnagar, Rao, Saxena, Bhatnagar, Meena, Barbar, Chouhan, %26amp; Vimal, 2006).

    9. What types of sample are employed in the study? Briefly, describe the samples and sample design. Are the samples strong on external validity?

    A: The types of sample that are employed in the study are. The sample design is not known in the study. .The samples are strong are not strong on external validity.

    10. Q: What is the study population?

    A: The study population is ambiguous and not clearly stated (Bhatnagar, Rao, Saxena, Bhatnagar, Meena, Barbar, Chouhan, and Vimal, 2006).

    11. Q: How are data collected?

    A: Using a standardized procedure lab specimen techniques were used to collect data (Bhatnagar, Rao, Saxena, Bhatnagar, Meena, Barbar, Chouhan, and Vimal, 2006). The mice were divided into three groups: control (n=10), experimental group E1 (n= 15), E2 (n= 15). Each mouse was caged separately. Control group mice were given deionized, defluoridated water (Bhatnagar, Rao, Saxena, Bhatnagar, Meena, Barbar, Chouhan, and Vimal, 2006). Mice in the E1 group were given 60 ppm F (from 132.6 mg NaF/L) in their drinking water while those in the E2 group were given 120 ppm F (from 265.2) mgNaF/L) in their drinking water (Bhatnagar, Rao, Saxena, Bhatnagar, Meena, Barbar, Chouhan, and Vimal, 2006). After 30 days all the mice were weighed and sacrificed by cervical decapitation (Bhatnagar, Rao, Saxena, Bhatnagar, Meena, Barbar, Chouhan, and Vimal, 2006). The brain, liver, and gastrocnemius muscles were dissected out and place on chilled glass plates, dried, and weighed (Bhatnagar, Rao, Saxena, Bhatnagar, Meena, Barbar, Chouhan, and Vimal, 2006). Brains were cut into two sagital pieces with the help of surgical blade, and the hippocampus was dissected out under a stereomicroscope (Bhatnagar, Rao, Saxena, Bhatnagar, Meena, Barbar, Chouhan, and Vimal, 2006). Tissues of at least three animals were pooled to prepare enough sample for biochemical estimation (Bhatnagar, Rao, Saxena, Bhatnagar, MeeWhat would your grade be for this paper for a social science research paper that i am just summarizing and an?If you just summarize don't expect to get an A or B.

    More like a C- or D+